Тренировочные упражнения в разделе "Письмо" в формате подготовки к ОГЭ
статья по английскому языку (9 класс) по теме

ТЕХНОЛОГИЯ ПОДГОТОВКИ К ОГЭ. РАЗДЕЛ «ПИСЬМО».

I этап – “Ориентирование на результат”

(сентябрь-октябрь)

II этап – “Работа с шаблоном”

(ноябрь).

III этап – “Составление ответов на вопросы” (ноябрь-декабрь).

IV этап – Формирование навыка написания личного письма и оценки выполненной работы

(декабрь - май).

Задание

You have 30 minutes to do this task.

You have received a letter from your English–speaking pen friend, Ben.

…We’ve moved house and now I have to go to a new school. It’s a pity because I liked my old school and I had a lot of friends there. Now I feel a bit lonely but I hope to find some friends here too….

…What do you like most about your school? Have you got a lot of friends at school? What do you usually do with your school friends in your free time? …

Write him a letter and answer his 3 questions.

Write 100–120 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.

Saint Petersburg

Russia

10 October2016

     Dear Ben,

     Thank you for your last letter. Sorry, I haven’t written for so long.

     In your letter you asked me about my school. Most of all, I like sports facilities in my school. I go to the gym on Mondays also I go swimming on Fridays. I have got a lot of friends at school because I’m sociable and I can make friends easily. My friends and I usually play football on weekdays in our free time. At weekends we go to the cinema or eat out.

     I’d better go now as I have to do my homework.

     Write back soon.

     All the best,

     Nikita

                              Анализ типичных ошибок

Критерий К1.

«What jobs would you like a robot to do at your home?»

• I’ve got some robots in my house.
• Robots must do work on factories and mines.
• I’d rather use robots in science and medicine.

«What else can robots be used for?»

• I think robots can do what you want.

«Do you find science fiction films interesting or not, and why?»

• I can’t say that science fiction films are my favourite. I enjoy watching horror films.
• I find fiction films interesting because they are fantastic plots.

К 2: Организация текста

-отсутствовали адрес, дата;

-деление текста на абзацы недостаточно логично.

Средства логической связи:

• I don’t like fiction films. It’s boring.
• this-these      Watching this films
• Yes, I find that it is very interesting …
• Whell, (в начале абзаца + ошибка в написании)

К 3: Лексико-грамматическое оформление текста.

• сказуемое не согласуется с подлежащим: My dad help…., it tell us …;
• употребление артиклей: I would like robot; a films;
• образование степеней сравнения прилагательных: more better; the goodest;
• грамматически неверное использование модальных глаголов: can doing; must to go;

K 4: Орфография и пунктуация.

• неправильно пишут такие слова: medicene, bisy, latter, hourse, wich, thinks (things), becouse, diner;
• неправильно пишут суффиксы: beautifull, wonderfull;
• не отделяют вводные слова и словосочетания запятыми;
• ставят точку после имени.

В правом верхнем углу следует указать краткий адрес:

Saint Petersburg

Russia

St. Petersburg

Russia

Под адресом нужно написать дату письма:

28 May 2016

28/05/16

ШАБЛОН

Dear Ben,

Thank you for your (last/recent) letter. / Thanks so much for your long letter.

Sorry, I haven’t been in touch for so long. / Sorry, I haven’t written for so long. / Sorry, I haven’t written for so long because I have been busy at school studying for my exams.

In your letter you asked me about …

I’d better go now as I have to do my homework. / I have to go now because my Mum asked me to help her with the washing up./ I’d better go now as I have to take my dog for a walk.

Write back soon. / I can’t wait to hear from you! / Drop me a letter. / Take care and keep in touch.

All the best,

Best wishes,

Denis

Anton

Слова – связки

Нельзя начинать предложения с

• Of course
• Well
• Yes
• But

Знаки препинания

• Dear Ben,
• By the way,
• We have bought cabbage, watermelon, and some bananas.
• While I was talking on the phone, the cat stole my steak.
• Best wishes,
• Tom